Write a letter to a bus company saying you have left something valuable on the bus and tell them what to do if they find it.
The reason I am writing this letter to you is because I have left my bag bus which I took. It was on Tuesday 5th of August at around 3:00pm. The bus station the bus was at Jalan Pinang (bus no 55) and I got at Jalan Tujuan.
If you have found it could you please call me on 03 5192 6541 or email me at email@example.com and I will arrange a pick-up from your office.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
This letter needs some work. It covers the task and has the right structure. However the structure of the sentences needs some attention as well as the accuracy of expressions (see comments underlined in blue for more details). Overall, this looks like a Band 6.5 letter.
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