Even though globalization affects the world’s economy in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
Globalization is a process of advancement and increase in interaction between the worlds’ countries and people. It locomotion, communication, knowledge and skills. is gaining over the entire world. It has enough world attention needed from international organization in promoting and encouraging human right and freedom , opportunities, economic, social and culture rights.
However, there are some countries that are missing out opportunities that are offered and its taken as a big problem to their country. They are the poorer countries that are not connected to the people globally and their people are unskilled due to the lack of knowledge and . They are also unable to trade with the other countries which are richer and larger as they are unable to meet the demand of them. They also will not have the opportunities and the challenges that are .
To conclude, globalization has contributed a lot to the world’s but the international organization should also not forget the poorer countries and the countries should also tackle its other negative sides that affect the world.
This essay doesn’t have a paragraph about the positive side of globalization, and it should – so the task is only partially covered. The structure is fine, the paragraphs are logically connected and linking words are used effectively enough. However, there are many spelling and grammatical errors (see comments underlined in blue). Overall, this looks like a Band 6 – 6.5 essay.
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